One forty five afternoon red
car parked left hand si de
of street no distinguishing
feature still wet day a bicycle
across the way a green door-
way with arched upper window
a backyard edge of back wall
to enclosed alley low down small
windows and two other cars green
and blue parked too and miles
and more miles still to go.
From: Selected Poems of Robert Creeley (University of California
Press, 1991).
Audio: http://wings.buffalo.edu/epc/linebreak/programs/creeley/
There can be something ship-like about a house at night.
When a day runs aground, I often turn to poetry then, to get
as far beyond my shores as possib le. Which is how –
in the small internet-hours, browsing audio clips of the Black
Mountain poets – I first heard Creeley recite this poem.
He’d written it in a Töölönkatu room
whose one window (in his words) “looked out on the central
courtyard of this great sort of apartment block… the
garbage bins and whatnot.” That window became his “intimate
companion and reference, day and night”, its shifting
Finnish light flooding his attention. Reflecting the window’s
form in nine block-shaped segments – each “almost
like a sonnet in its determined compacting” –
Creeley developed a mini-album of snapshots of what had framed
itself for accidental scrutiny, in all its circumstantial
strength.
Why did this shard of Helsinki Window so captivate me? Because
I loved the idea of it. It said: the cosmos doesn’t
wash its hands – it comes to us raw, wonderfully dirty.
For such a seemingly slight piece, I found myself drawn into
its moment-to-moment alertness. I can’t honestly associate
the poem with any particular trauma, or its resolution; but
it did bolster my growing sense of not wanting to be a tourist
in my own existence. I admired, too, as a physicist, the dry
observation: Creeley’s no-fuss precision, charged so
amply with those fracturing line breaks, draws science and
poetry much closer together than any poet’s scientific
phrase-dropping ever could. And he was reasserting that life
mostly happens beyond the spotlight, past the edge of reputation
or rhetoric. His focus on process over product, that desire
to express without duress, was refreshing. Generously, Creeley
was providing me with a humble – yet resonant –
inch from which I could take my own particular mile. This
was the kind of openness I was beginning to seek in my reading:
accessibility without obviousness; completeness which, nevertheless,
resists closure. Along with such contemporaries as Charles
Olson, Robert Duncan and Denise Levertov, Creeley was taking
(or so it seemed, from this side of the pond) a road much
less travelled by.
Re-reading One forty five, though, I confess I’m not
always as struck as I was initially. I suppose, as with that
Töölönkatu window, the light in us constantly
shifts. However, Creeley’s “curious parody of
Frost” (again, his words) rarely fails to satisfy: the
most obvious reference (to Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening,
of course) dominates the last line; but notice how Frost’s
snow becomes a more banal “wet day”, the harness-shaking
horse an assembly of nondescript parked cars. The presence
of those “small/ windows” within Creeley’s
window-poem imitates, I feel, the nestling of Frost’s
poem within his. There’s much else to savour whenever
revisiting: for instance, the internal rhymes stitching everything
together (“day : way”, “two : blue : too”,
etc.); or the way that one firm end-rhyme (“wall : small”)
might have been a touch too strong for the piece, were it
not offset by the canny line break between the adjective and
its noun. (Yes, “window : go” rhyme too, but are
well separated.) All said, within eleven lines Creeley establishes
and sustains a mystery of the ordinary, one I never quite
manage to herd, wholesale, into any rational paddock.
I recall that anecdote about a composer (was it, perhaps,
Chopin, or Schumann?) who, when asked to explain something
he’d just played, played it again. If you’re not
convinced by Helsinki Window, try playing it on your ear,
again, perhaps with the composer himself at the keyboard.
Before we agree to differ, soak up that faintly held-back,
fatigued intonation, the idiosyncratic way Creeley drops a
poem through its line breaks. With his voice in attendance,
maybe you’ll catch something of what rose to the surface
for me, dim yet muscular, that night I first heard Creeley
speak it: a sense of the seamless ‘one-ness’ threading
all experience, however unremarkable in kind. Even now, One
forty five makes me turn to my own foursquare companion, its
modest pentaptych of North London skyline, to look through
it a little less lazily. On those wet days of the mind, becalmed
among my own half-thoughts, it’s one of the poems I
try to lift my face to. Sometimes, by that twilight glow,
through its tiny compass, I am led outside.
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